I enjoy effective art and design.
I try to provide the least amount of content with the most efficient and effective method of solving an issue. My vector image is a prime example of how the simplest of designs can solve the issue. I originally started out with having the vanishing point end at the end of a spiral hole with the letters twirling around. I realized though that it wasn't giving the visual effect of an actual vanishing point. I then had the light bulb turned on in my head, and whuh-lah, I ended up going with logic, and designed an actual vanishing point.
What I like about this piece is the interesting perspective and vanishing point you used. Something I would change is the clarity of the message, I don't exactly understand what it means or what the letters are spelling.
ReplyDeleteits a nice seen the road almost looks like a shadow the sun is casting. however the message is very confusing and i don't know what your saying.
ReplyDeleteI like your concept. At first, I thought it was lines forming into letters but as I look closer it looks more like you were trying to convey movement. My only suggestions are: for you to push the piece further (by adding more) and to better the transition from small letters to bigger letters.
ReplyDeleteThis is a cool piece. I see it a text highway of sorts. I think there should be a little more to it though. Maybe some more text "stationary" as opposed to on the highway.
ReplyDeleteI like the fact that you had the word vanishing, vanish into the distance. The thing I would have liked to see more of is more color or maybe more words? It just needs a little more of something.
ReplyDeleteI like this one. It conveys the meaning of the word by having it do what its meaning is. At first it was difficult to tell what the letters spelled, but I thing just rotating them so they are all right side up to the viewer would be an easy fix.
ReplyDeleteI like his design, the words become blur in the desert. It's really a good idea to show words' appearance, not the meanings.
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