Bonnie, this is honestly so good. The fact that you have a sound for everything and it is perfectly timed and it sounds like exactly what you would be hearing if you were doing the action in real life. This is great! Good job.
love love love the black and white. Both that and the song really fit into your personal style. Maybe show the boy shoes and extend the scene where she is relaxing
Nice touch with the black and white, really makes it more distinguishable as your piece! Also, good job capturing sounds for the other objects and things happening as well.
Bonnie, this is honestly so good. The fact that you have a sound for everything and it is perfectly timed and it sounds like exactly what you would be hearing if you were doing the action in real life. This is great! Good job.
ReplyDeleteI really like all that you added. The sounds were perfect and the black and white was very interesting. I also like the steam from the pot.
ReplyDeletelove love love the black and white. Both that and the song really fit into your personal style. Maybe show the boy shoes and extend the scene where she is relaxing
ReplyDeleteI like this in black and white, and I think it really adds to the piece. I also really like how you used the real shoe sounds.
ReplyDeleteNice touch with the black and white, really makes it more distinguishable as your piece! Also, good job capturing sounds for the other objects and things happening as well.
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